Tuesday, October 26, 2010

Blog 12 review work

While reading my blogs, I noticed I can get a bit off topic and not focus on the question that was given to us. It looks like I did not even read the material or made any sense while talking about the topic. I realized I do not quote the book or make any inferences towards it. It looks like I just put sentences or words together just to meet the requirement. I am repeating the same thing over and over in the blogs. But one thing I can say is that I meet the requirement most of the time. It defiantly does not look like I wrote these blogs. I do not know what I was on when I came up with some of these ideas. I look at my blog and I feel like I could be more descriptive and quote more. I feel like I could express myself in my writing a whole lot better, if I can actually understand the question. The nature of my post actually has not changed, usually when you do something often enough things will get better. But when I read these post I feel like I am not getting better at it. My blogs truthfully they are not exciting enough for me to even read, let alone for someone else to. I feel like they would lose focus fast and become disinterested in it. I notice the stories and stuff changing, I could see change here and there but that is not enough to make my post great enough. The changes I can account for is when we talk in class about a subject, it actually gives me a idea of what I actually want to write about. So I feel like that can help abit as well. One of the ideas I feel that is worth on revisiting was the post on “ Am I Human?” That was actually I feel the best post I had so far. I feel like we should write about life and what is on your mind at the end of the week. But we write atleast three blogs a week which can be a bit overwhelming at times. The blogging is not a bad idea but you got to change the subject from time to time, like maybe one time change it to a thing that we would never write about. That would be a good post.

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